The line graph elucidates the information about the requirement of electricity during regular days in winter and summer while the pie chart illustrates the usage of electricity in normal English house.
The given line graph reveals that in starting three hours use of electricity is around 35,000 units in winter and need of electricity in summer is half of the former that is 17,000 units nearly. However, the demand for electricity is vary with some fluctuations is reached to 20,000 units within 24 hours of a day in summer. Furthermore, the requirements of electricity is increase significantly with drastic changes that is 49,000 units in winter till 21 hours of day. Also, the usage of electricity is decresed in next three hours and attain same number of units as starting.
Moving towards the pie chart it can be clearly seen that most of the electricity is used for heating purpose such as water and room that is 52%. Moreover, the 18% consumption of electricity is observed in household chores such as Ovens, kettles, washing machines. In addition to it, vacuum cleaners, Food, mixers and other electric tools utilize 15% of electricity and the same usage of electricity by lightning, television and radio.
All in all, it can be stated that the requirement of electricity during winter is higher than the summer in regular days. However, the more than half of electricity used for heating purpose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...17,000 units nearly. However, the demand for electricity is vary with some fluctu...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...However, the demand for electricity is vary with some fluctuations is reached to 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06808510638 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81480275179 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4526982148 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350597848296 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150313283013 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709961036395 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232686081442 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551271439699 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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