the graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money used in entertained activities, such as television, publishing, music, video and cinema in two separate years. At first glance, Americans spend most money on entertainment in three areas.
It can be seen from the graph that the amount of money used for entertainment in 1995 was low. The figure for Asia was the lowest, at 67$ billion and United State reached the highest, at 184$ billion. The most popularly entertained activity was publishing, making around 40$ billion in Asia and Europe and approximately 100$ billion in America. The second most popular activity is watching television, accounting for just under 40$ billion for in both Asia and Europe and just over 50$ billion for America. The other acitvities like listening to music, playing videos and cinema occupied at under 30$ billion in both three areas.
Over the five years after 1995, the amount of money considerably increased. In America, this figure reached 257$ billion and publishing still made the highest proportion, at around 120$ billion. The figure for watching television reached approximately 100$ billion, while the amount of money spent on music, video and cinema did not remarkably change. People living in Asia and Europe only spent 110$ billion and 131$ billion on entertainment. The amount of money used for television and publishing significantly rose, while the figure for music, video and cinema only rapidly grew in both Asia and Europe.
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... activity was publishing, making around 40$ billion in Asia and Europe and approxim...
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...on in Asia and Europe and approximately 100$ billion in America. The second most pop...
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... approximately 100$ billion in America. The second most popular activity is watchin...
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...r in both Asia and Europe and just over 50$ billion for America. The other acitviti...
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... and just over 50$ billion for America. The other acitvities like listening to musi...
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...ing videos and cinema occupied at under 30$ billion in both three areas. Over t...
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...le living in Asia and Europe only spent 110$ billion and 131$ billion on entertainme...
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... and Europe only spent 110$ billion and 131$ billion on entertainment. The amount of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23109243697 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71103494489 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.946461289 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100874105624 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053385434711 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483448264747 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777900583417 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00245448950003 0.0819641961636 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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