It is very important for people to be able to speak more than one language. therefore, children should start learning a foreign language as young as possible.
Do you agree or disagree?
To a certain extent I agree that people should learn more than one language to be able to communicate better. However, I also think that mother tongue is also very important and should not be defied.
On the one hand, if someone can use foreign language expertly, they will have more opportunities than other people. For example, they can study abroad or promote more easily and they can also understand more things because they have a ability to access many sources of information. Therefore, there are benefits for children when they learn another language. Moreover the younger people are able to study foreign languages faster than adults. They can pronounce many words exactly and remember more new vocabularies, furthermore they have a better ability to retain what they taught. In addition when they are a child, they do not worry about money, family,…so they will concerntrate on their studying.
However, native tongue is not less important. If somebody cannot speak mother tongue influently, they will face to many obstacles especially children. They will not be able to study at a primary school or secondary school in a good way and they have few friends and are bullied. That will be a bad thing for children, which is a cause of depression. Besides that, children learning mother tongue will know about culture of their country, thus they will feel patriotic and be proud of traditions.
In summary, children should learn a foreign language to help for their development. However, they also know how to use native tongue influently to avoid many troubles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07662835249 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61367280023 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1935890849 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262907038593 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114774989265 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10513694191 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192928771184 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954136105845 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.