The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map presents two potential positions for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon and the surrounding area. Overall, the main difference between the two sites is that S1 is outside the town, whereas S2 is in the town center.
The first site (S1) is located in the countryside, to the north-west of Garlsdon. It is close to the northern residential area and not far from the main road that links Hindon with Garlsdon. However, it would be difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon.
By contrast, the second site (S2) is in the town center. It is near to the housing area, which surrounds the town center. It is also close to the main road that runs through Garlsdon from Hindo to Cransdon. S2 is 16 kilometres away from Bransdon and 25 kilometres away from Cransdon. However, because of no traffic zone in the town center, S2 would be no access by car.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...own, whereas S2 is in the town center. The first site S1 is located in the coun...
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Suggestion:
...t to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon. By contrast, the second site S2 is in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5886488788 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2889132287 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28471187138 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116526262366 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153385097525 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223887710582 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203456341497 0.0819641961636 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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