Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.
What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
These days, environment has polluted more and more seriously and humans are one of the causes of damaging environment. Personally, I think that both government and individuals should give some solutions to protect environment.
Firstly, many people have damaged environment by wasting goods, because which makes the amount of rubbish significantly increase. This leads to air and water pollution, which has a detrimental effect on human health and animal. Secondly, people build many factories to produce, but industrial rubbish which is eliminated by factories damage environment, which causes acid-rain and makes the Earth warmer. Moreover, many companies exploit the excess of fuel sources, impacting to natural environment and making ecosystem imbalanced. They deforest forest to cause flood; they hunt wild animals so the number of spices which have be extinct rises.
However, governments could educate communities to raise people’s awareness about protecting environment. For example, governments should make them know environmental pollution and effect on human life, encourage them to recycle garbage, save water and energy. Moreover, government should rise the tax level to prevent exploiting and use this money to improve environment. Besides that, everyone can participate to protecting environment by growing trees, collecting garbage in public places. Many parents could teach their children to love nature and to use energy efficiently.
In conclusion, I believe that everyone plays an important role in defending environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90707964602 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98788899009 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672566371681 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1209967706 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20539140288 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06727577854 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429891618148 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114510344868 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535570285409 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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