In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?
These days, almost countries produce the big amount of rubbish, which affects environment and human health negatively. However, most people do not reuse their garbage, so this situation becomes more critical.
There are a number of reasons why people do not recycle their rubbish. Firstly, people do not have enough time to do this. They are always busy with very many works such as earning money, doing housework, taking care of their children. Therefore, maybe, they cannot many things they want and they also need to take a rest. The second reason is people become to lazy. They like convenience and therefore they prefer to use something once and throw away. They spend much more time on entertainment, work and study than recycling rubbish, because they think it is not necessary. Moreover, the main reason is that people are not aware of effect of rubbish on environment. They do not know about that rubbish is the cause of air and water pollution and it brings many illnesses.
There are some solutions to solve this situation. First of all, government should educate general public about some harms rubbish brings. With the big amount of rubbish, it will causes to pollute environment seriously, damage ecosystem and make viruses develop fast. Moreover, the cost of waste treatment is very expensive, so every citizen should be responsible for their rubbish. They should recycle their garbage as much as they could in order to bring benefits for themselves and society. Reusing rubbish help them not only protect environment but also save money.
All in all, if government could change attitude of general public about rubbish and importance of recycling rubbish, this situation will be solved in the fast way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10211267606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47059677867 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8291430949 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425677931909 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12938878831 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914279000954 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231594583926 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091777543324 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.