Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people believe that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people think that music plays an important role in human life and it brings many benefits to societies. However beside much value, music also has some negative effect which is considered
On the one hand, music influences on individuals positively. First of all, music help people relax after working-hard hours. When they listen to music, they might feel comfortable and forget some problems they have to face. As a result, their brain will activate more effective and resist stresses. Moreover, listening to music make them balance emotion, keep calm which is a necessary thing in life. Some kinds of music have function in improving sleeping and maintaining mental health. Besides that, music is also a specific for culture of an area or a country, showing some traditional value and customs of ancestors. Therefore, music has an important meaning with societies.
On the other hand, music also affect people negaitvely, especially on the children. For example, when children listen to some musics which is not appropriate with age of them. That thing might make to change awareness of children, leading to some wrong thinking and behaviours. In addition, the kinds of music have evil content, which influences but only children not also teenagers who cannot distinguish the difference between good and bad things.
In conclusion, I think that music can have both positive and negative influences on people and societies, which depends on musical types. However, people cannot really separate from music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30991735537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62229724973 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.339599411 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416790814401 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148809827355 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091929902401 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290621000042 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826757661451 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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