The process shows diamonds moving from the mine to the retailer
The flowchart illustrates the steps in the process of getting diamonds from a mine to the those who are selling them.
The process begins with the stones being mined in their rough form, following which they are sorted into two different grades, namely high grade and low grade.
The low grade diamonds are used for industrial purposes, after which they are cut and shaped then tested for their level of hardness. The final step before being sent to the retailers is the pricing.
High grade diamonds have a number of additional processes. Setting aside for comestic uses, they are priced then submitted to a digital analysis to ensure the most effective cut. They are then cut using a machine or cut by hand, before they are polished. At this point, they are rated and dependent on that rating are either returned for further polishing or sent to the retailers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ine to the those who are selling them. The process begins with the stones being...
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...ades, namely high grade and low grade. The low grade diamonds are used for indu...
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...s, namely high grade and low grade. The low grade diamonds are used for industr...
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...hen tested for their level of hardness. The final step before being sent to the ret...
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... sent to the retailers is the pricing. High grade diamonds have a number of add...
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...her polishing or sent to the retailers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88590604027 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30296221667 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8600059067 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152258258312 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714921561889 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880677777513 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119037003343 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990589556866 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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