The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The bar graph illustrates the details of male and women of worker rates over 6 nations( Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, UK, Newzealand, and the USA) in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, it can be seen that both years male employe hold the highest rate compare to the female employee. In recent years, male employee in Iceland has the highest rate where the female employee in Switzerland holds the top rate among other countries.
On the one hand, in 1995 male employee rates for the Switzerland and Iceland are around 65% and almost 71% respectively, and female employee rates are 58% and 40% respectively while in 2005 employment rates in Switzerland(male and female had around 78% and 68% respectively)and Iceland (male had almost 82% and female had around 52%).
On the other hand, the male employment rates are increased from around 58% (1995) to 68% (2005) and female employment rates in Australia is rose to almost 39% (2005) from around 27%(1995). In 1995, Uk, Newzealand, and USA male employment rates are around 54%, 60% and 59% respectively where a female employee is around 50%, 24% and 47%while in 2005 male employment and female employment are rose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0725388601 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74770703622 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466321243523 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0531882153 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.166666667 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244510044176 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156379579126 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652528882652 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169431204263 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603603516717 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.