The line graph illustrates the information about how distinct types of investigation were conducted especially through the tourist office centre from January to June during the year of 2011.
Overall, it is palpable that face to face enquiries made the maximum range, whereas the letter queries accounted for the least number than that of the rest.
Generally, on January, telephone and e-mail enquiries lied upto approximately 800 but unfortunately, letter queries constantly abbreviated and reached upto below 800.From march to June, its range decremented to all round 400 , while the telephone enquiries progressively rose except on February and April periods but become 1600 on June.
Analysing further, direct queries started from above 400 which were 2 times less than the march enquiries which lied upto 800.After 3 months, its queries sky rocketed and reached peak point (1900) which were 300 more than the telephone enquiries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...une during the year of 2011. Overall, it is palpable that face to face enquiri...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'but' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buts'.
Suggestion: buts
...l enquiries lied upto approximately 800 but unfortunately, letter queries constantl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
... abbreviated and reached upto below 800.From march to June, its range decremented to...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., its range decremented to all round 400 , while the telephone enquiries progressi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...the march enquiries which lied upto 800.After 3 months, its queries sky rocketed and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52413793103 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7477024299 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1138752385 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.25 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136312426251 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814952611315 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515609859994 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814952611315 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515609859994 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 61.2550243902 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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