Research and Development sector in Pharmaceutical industry keep going to invent new effective drugs medicine that help in work as a preventive measure as well as generating a strong customer base by offering it on a reasonable cost. In this context , Some people opines that the traditional medicines are more better than western medicine while other believes western medicine are the innovative one. The effectiveness of these medicine based on the general people's point of view. I agree with this, I will explain reasons and comparisons of these complementary form of medicines in the following paragraphs.
Firstly , the traditional medicine are the true product of natural herbs. People have a strong faith in traditional medicine since it providing a magical results by destroying complicated and killing diseases. For example , Patanjali medicine products in which joint pain removal medicine and hair growth medicine and many more are available in the market. It's based on 100% natural ingredients without interference of chemicals. Large proportion of Indian society purchased Patanjali medicine products and also other sub -products under it. Traditional medicines are available at high cost due to their high quality and improve the body's health and have no side - effects.
Secondly, As the whole society changing as per the traditions and custom's changing, it results in adoption of innovative ways to treat old diseases .Modern medicines give a quick relief at a lower cost ranging from average grade to high grade. Mostly people have a strong intuition that modern medicine are far better than traditional one because it is a composition of newly search drug that working as a highly faster and available in affordable cost. For example , Disperin medicine is helping people to get over with their headache pain in just a few minutes. It's variety of products giving different result with an assurance of highly satisfaction. That's why for realising better utility more people refer to buy economic medicine product.
In the conclusion, it seems to me that the both form of medicine whether it is traditional or medicine, have their significance importance and results on the basis of people's attitudes and beliefs. It's provable by comparing the above -stated paragraphs. The two complementary medicines are more effective and useful against each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35656836461 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89937917439 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563002680965 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7661436221 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211284930686 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079270139839 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425027618034 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151816652435 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438826245803 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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