The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The line graph depicts the population changes between three different countries in the Oregon, United States during 60-year period.

Overall, the number of people who lived in Washington, Yamhill and Columbia showed an upward trend. Moreover, the figure for Washington population was the highest throughout the year.

In the initial year, there was 75,000 people lived in Washingthon before it increased gradually to about 120,000 after 30-year period. In Yamhill and Columbia, the number of population were stood at 30,000 and 29,000 respectively. Although the figure for the two last countries showed a slight increase in 1970, it was still under 45,000.

By 2000, as can be seen that more people lived in Washington and reached the peak approximately 250,000, while the number of population in Yamhill experienced a gradual increase about 90,000, and people who came to Columbia just a slight under the figure for Yamhill population with around 80,000.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies showed a slight increase in 1970, it was still under 45,000. By 2000, as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45033112583 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64245879494 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2321966015 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159899668282 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088457679045 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12351599545 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137017768177 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145269712289 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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