The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
The graph illustrates growth of population over the years 2000 to present year. It also depicts the prediction of the population growth from the present year to year 2050.
At the year 2000, the population of China was recorded approximately as 1.25 billion which is greater than India’s population of 1 billion. The population of both countries showed an increase approximately till the year 2028. At the same year the population of both countries are predicted to be equal which is predicted as 1.45 billion.
After the year 2028 the population of China is estimated to decrease till the year 2050. Where as India’s population is expected to increase till 2050 and estimated to be around 1.6 billion. Although in the year 2000, population of China was more than the population of India, the population of India is predicted to be more than China’s population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10344827586 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98597594074 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2663116625 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474945018135 0.215688989381 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256553541032 0.103423049105 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07502437679 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358878527754 0.15604864568 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438076103322 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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