The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The line graph illustrate the number of people as a percentage, from 65 years and above between 1940 and a projection unto 2040 in Japan, Sweden and USA.

Overall, Japan has the least number of people from 65 plus in from 1940, though, it is estimated that from 2020, a sharp increase will be experienced above all other 3 countries. It is noticeable that, USA has the majority of over 65 in it's population from 1940 to 2000, while Sweden overtook USA and became the highest with major number of above 65, as it is projected to be superceded by Japan from 2020s. Generally, there was an increase in population of 65 years plus in all countries.

Highlighted on the chart, Japan has the least number of above 65 in 1940, at 5% and it fell to approximately 4% in 1960. It remained constant up to late 1980s, which was followed by a gradual increase in 2020 and it is projected to continue rising to above 25% in 2040. It is estimated that it will fluctuate above all other nations.

Furthermore, USA had the highest population of people over 65 from 1940 to 2000, at around 9% in 1940 and it increased dramatically to 15% in 1980 and a partial steady decrease was noted below Sweden from late 1990s. Therefore, it is projected to rise to about 24% in 2040 below other 2 countries, while Sweden was at almost 7% in 1940. It rose moderately to around 14% in 1980. A slight decline was noted in 2000 to approximately 13%. A sharp increase was experienced in 2000, at 20%, superceded by a considerable drop to around 17% and an estimated rapid growth to about 25% in 2040.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 33.7804878049 216% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51219512195 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67978457557 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452961672474 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4669897368 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215261810663 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855991487691 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686646420357 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144473554027 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459817211197 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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