The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

The line graph illustrates the percentage of 65 years and older population for three countries during the period 1940 to 2040.

According to the diagram, the elderly population is growing through this period, in all the countries, namely Japan, Sweden and USA.

As the figures represent, the population of this age group was among 5 to 9 percent for three countries at 1940, such that USA stands at the first place followed by Sweden and Japan respectively. It is predicted that at 2040, the ranks will change so that Japan ranks first, with almost 27 percent share of 65 plus years residents, and Sweden accounts for the second position, hosting 25 percent elderlies. The USA will also be home to 23 percent of its population at this age group.

This transition occurs while USA experiences the least alternations and follows a steady increasing trend. On the other hand, the figures for Sweden fluctuate dramatically, until finally reaching that of USA at nearly 2000. However, Japan starts with a declining pattern, which gradually undergoes an incline at 1987 and makes a sharp rise in 2030, whereas its 65 years old population goes beyond that of two other countries at the same period.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64627983412 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9348012412 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180416372953 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900245150339 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989329326554 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137232319014 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112791662016 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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