The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the trend in the population in the USA, Sweden and Japan for those aged 65 and over. The study covers a period from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, it can be seen that is an increasing trend in the number of people over the age of 65 from 1940 which will continue until 2040. It is also clear that Japan will be the leading country with the most number of elderly members by the end of the time frame.
In 1940, there was a steady increase in the population of those aged 65 and over in the USA starting of with just below 10 % during the initial year of the study which will reach to about 23 % by the end of 2040. This would mean an a difference of 13 % within a century.
Sweden, on the other hand, also started with about 8 % in 1940 which gradually increased to 20 % in 2015. This figure will slightly dip by 2028 before making a significant increment by the end of the study period.
Conversely, Japan, who had an initial rate of 5 % in its citizens aged 65 and over in 1940, made a marginal decrease at 3 % in 1960. This percentage continued for about 30 years before it increased to 5 % in 2005. Within the remaining 35 years, the elderly population will multiply to about five times more making it the highest among the three countries being observed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39330543933 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3083669729 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7141518079 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193778257981 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766012890426 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590641704459 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12208007577 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550695412546 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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