Teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their communities. This is good for the individuals concerned and society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Discuss, based on your own knowledge and experience.
There are some people who think that kids should not bear the responsibility of lending help to the society. Nevertheless, I completely oppose to this and strongly claim that the young ones have to put their hands and voice to good use and make an effort in making the world a better place.
First of all, this makes the children aware of the current situation in the society they live in. The reality is that only a few would mind about what is around them and try to help with what they can do. In fact, a lot of the younger generation right now are involved in charity works, medical missions, clean-up drives and free remedial class to the less fortunate which enable them to attain a higher level of self-perception and make them culturally sensitive.
Aside from this, doing unpaid works in the community fosters independence in terms of leadership. They are able to practice leading people, may it be the younger ones or the older members in the community, and rehabilitate the society to bring it back to its previous state. In fact, most of the young politicians in our city right now were once community volunteers. As a result, they were able to build confidence as they stepped-up and became city officials in our town.
And most importantly, the children who give back to the society are able to establish the right network. This is due to them being able to have a friendly relationship with the public and gain their trust as a whole. Showing a positive attitude toward other people and generously providing a helping hand make them well-known and influential young individuals in the city.
To conclude, although some people think that children are still young to make contributions to the society, I don't hold the same view. They should know the challenges in the community for them to influence others and gather a network to help them make a change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75229357798 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6522313609 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9526394767 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156800881781 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568982973703 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571822101168 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835431482665 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216505729156 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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