The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

Essay topics:

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

The bar graph compares the amount of coffee production in 4 different nations during the period of 20 years, beginning in 1990.
Overall, while Colombia experienced an downward trend in the proportion of coffee manufacture, the opposite trend was witness in the remaining nations. Moreover, Brazil accounted for the highest tones of coffee during the whole period.
According to the chart, Brazil dominated the highest position in 1990 with 0,7 million tones of coffee. During the next 20 years, this figure rose significantly,reaching a peak of nearly 1,9 millions in the last year. Following by Colombia, a nation made up for remarkbale number in 1990, at 0,6 million tones. However, this country experienced a steady decline by 0,3 million tones during the next 20-year-period.
The trend was totally different when it came to the remaining areas. While Indonesia manufactured 0,2 million tones of coffee in 1990 and increased the figure to 0,4 million tones in 2010, Vietnam also saw a significant growth in its coffee production, from just under 0,2 millions in 1990 to around 0,3 million tones in the last year.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18131868132 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96508381235 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0861330543 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190049812447 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762190967202 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731575843561 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133605557788 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826387069183 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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