The graphs below show the different reasons of two groups of students to choose
Dorrifod University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts compare the reasons of choosing Dorrifod University by two different
age groups which are 18-24 year olds and those above 25 years old.
It is clear from the graph that proximity to home is the reason chosen by over a third of both
age groups. Course offered is the second reason given by 35% of 18-24 year olds and just
under a quarter of the 25+ age group. Reputation of the faculty and relation to industry is
given importance by 12 % and 20% of the older age group, where as only a small minority
(2% and 4%) of the younger age group choose the university for these two reasons. In
contrast, facilities to study abroad and facilities on campus are valued more by the 18-24 year
age group, than those aged 25 and over. Under 5% of the 25 year plus age group enroll in the
university for these two reasons.
Overall both age groups have some similarities and some differences in their reasons for
opting to study in the given university.
The rendered charts compare the reasons of choosing dorrifod unversity of distinct age groups which are 18 to 24 and above 25 age group.
Overall, it is manifest that both age groups have some similarties and some differences in their reason for opting to study in the given university.
In the fleeting glance it is immensely clear that, close to home is most popular reason in given both age groups accounting for 36% and 39% respectively.In contrast course offered is second reason given by age for 18 to 24, which is 35%, the equivalent figure for over 25 age student decrease to just under a quartar.Reason for reputation of teaching staff remain constant in both age groups.
Probing further, age groups between 18 and 24 given reason for related to industry comprise of 4% and experience a fourfold in the age group over 25.As oppose to opportunity to study in age groups 18 to 24 aboard stand at 3% as against 9% in the age group over 25.As regard reason for facilities on campus amounting to 14% from 18 to 24 age group,which decrease by 12% in the age groups above 25.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69791666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66918826092 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.341550964 43.030603864 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.5 112.824112599 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168949618252 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140426800556 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394115786064 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140426800556 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394115786064 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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