The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average
annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where
relevant
The given table elucidates the employment rates and the average yearly salaries of fresh degree holders of an Australian University in 2009.
93% of the health graduates were employed and received and average annual salary of
$42,000. Law and Engineering and IT graduates received the highest salaries of $59,000 dollars each. It is interesting to note that their employment rate was lesser than that of Health graduates but their average salaries were higher. 78% of those graduating from the business field got employment and their average salaries per year were $ 52,000. 72% of those holding a bachelors degree in Arts and Social Science were employed and their average annual salaries were $ 50,000.
Overall, the least paid jobs were in Health and Science, whereas Law and IT and Engineering gaduates were the best paid
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 133.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52873743824 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 176.041082164 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.1569124409 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212637190459 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124843304995 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846821534502 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158480033336 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10444292255 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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