Essay topics:
The graphs show the employment of men and women in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where revelant.
Given are the two pie charts depicting the employment ratios between two genders by age group and by the age of their youngest children, respectively, in the UK, in 2008.
It is conspicuous that the employment rate of men was further higher than women’s in almost all periods except for the youngest and oldest group. Furthermore, the number of the over-60s working accounted for the least, in comparison with the others.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two pie charts depicting the employ...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the youngest'.
Suggestion: of the youngest
...yment ratios of bi-genders with the age of youngest children, male were the most popular em...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... women having children under 5 years old comprised the least employment rate with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, likewise, so, except for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65993265993 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60436785435 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488215488215 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4419679265 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981973025283 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471924041737 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374791489846 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669346050102 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170083113144 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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