Food products’ labels should contain detailed information about that food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What might be the most important information for food labels.
Up to the present, labels packing in the food occupy a pivotal role for human well-being and each individual has various distinct perspectives about food labels. Some people argue that the labels should include extensive information about the goods. I, personally, concur with this statement inasmuch as it is an indispensable material and this essay will address the explanations for my views as follows.
To begin with, a myriad of food products only offer a limited amount of information, therefore, the consumers are unable to grasp this items completely, which give the rise to numerous
repercussions. A meticulous label includes the product's name, its company, nutrition facts tables, list of ingredients, percent daily value, product dates and some notices. Some of them, however, are not placed in the packaging, resulting in customer confusion, inaccurate usage as well as detrimental for their health. For instance, a local bakery in Nghe An province produces breads packaged in plastic bags. In addition, its label is only a small piece of paper with simply the manufacturer's name and few components. It's worth noting that the label's expiration date is two months after the date of manufacturing, yet there's no production date on it. As a result, a multitude of people suffer food poisoning after eating bread that is beyond its maturity period.
By contrast, a label with thorough information does a favour for consumers in terms of the usage and elimination of items that aren't compatible. Firstly, nutrition labels are often displayed as a panel or grid on the back or side of packaging which assist customers choose between products and keep a check on the amount of ingredients that are beneficial for their well-being or not. Besides, labels also provide instructions on how to use this product properly. Additionally, product dates with accurate production and expiry date help buyers know how long the items can utilize and should purchase before the penultimate day. Eventually, numerous products offer percentages of ingredients in terms of fat and calories allow consumers, particularly those who are obese, to take a closer look at the product and decide whether or not to take it. Although the label contains a wealth of information, the far more important data is the notice since not all people can use it and frequently warns those with allergies not to use the product.
To summarize, food products’ labels are an integral part of almost all products so we should make full use of it to have a profound insight into these products and opt for suitable goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13679245283 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8722154779 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568396226415 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4228880007 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.117647059 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313189749099 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985800070601 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576638795584 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181845915422 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653805320574 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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