households owning and renting accommodation in england and wales 1918 to 2011

Essay topics:

households owning and renting accommodation in england and wales 1918 to 2011

there are some different data changes in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. households in owned accommodation tend to decline, in 2011 it has been increased. households in rented accommodation are always increased. they have some differences in the economy or other factors. I will analyze this reason in the following paragraphs.

The households owned are occupied about 23 percent and households in rented accommodation are about 77 percent. there are far more renters than homeowners. 1971 was a dividing line, with an increase in homeownership and a decrease in rental housing. they are the same amount in 1971. The owned accommodation is continuing to increase from 1970 to 2011 and the households in rented accommodation persistent decline, even though they're have a bit fluctuation.

To sum up, it means when a certain person has money and he will buy a house. when it is increasing in households in owned accommodation, it means the economy is raising.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12025316456 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14816641405 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5421307121 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4166666667 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471996440868 0.215688989381 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14180226455 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149163547901 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276943758118 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149769331381 0.0819641961636 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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