IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The tables illustrates the change in Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sales from 1999 to 2004 in five particularly countries in europe namely UK, Switzerland, Denmark, belgium, Sweden. It can be clearly seen from the tables that both money of coffee and bananas use in fairtrade-laballed surged dramatically.
In 1999, sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee in Denmark and UK stood at just over 1,5 millions of europe while switzerland came top at 3 millions. Meanwhile Sweden and Belgium ‘s number just approximately 1 millions. Five years later, the sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee in uk rose significantly to 20 millions euros, 3 times as high as the number of switzerland whereas between 1999 and 2004 saw a slight increase of coffee fairtrade-labelled sales in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
In addition, the sales of fairtrade-labelled bananas in Switzerland was highest in 1999 at 15 millions euros , five year later, this figure grow up sharply to 47 millions. Beside that, from 1999 to 2004 experienced a slight decrease in Sweden and Denmark ‘s bananas fairtrade-labblled sale . Finally, UK and belgium ‘s sales of fairtrade-labelled bananas went up steadily from 1 to 5,5 millions ( in UK) and from 0.6 to 4 millions (in Belgium).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The tables illustrates the change in Fairtrade-labelled coffee...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
... in Denmark and UK stood at just over 1,5 millions of europe while switzerland came top at 3 ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ile switzerland came top at 3 millions. Meanwhile Sweden and Belgium 's number just ...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...was highest in 1999 at 15 millions euros , five year later, this figure grow up sh...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... 's bananas fairtrade-labblled sale . Finally, UK and belgium 's sales o...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... went up steadily from 1 to 5,5 millions in UK and from 0.6 to 4 millions in Belg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35858585859 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73427034372 2.65546596893 141% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.152492886 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.625 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352737720108 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184169521991 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106154403845 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283918727289 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05355781653 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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