International migration in UK

Essay topics:

International migration in UK

The chart below illustrates information about international immigration in UK.
All period from 1999 to 2008 both immigration and emigration experienced an upward trend, but the figures of immigration were dramatically higher. Net migration fluctuated widely and peaked in 2007.
In 1999 about 450,000 people came to live in UK, while approximately 300,000 decided to leave the country. Then both trends flattened out at about under 500,000 and slightly more than 300,000 people. The figure for net migration was around 160,000 at first. Following this, numbers gradually increased. There were a pick of net migration at 250,000 in 2004, which was followed by steady decline.
After 2004, rate of immigration remained high, while emigration number fluctuated. It dropped sharply in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. Consequently, net migration rose at around 240,000 in 2007, but bounce back to 160,000 in 2008.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd trend, but the figures of immigration were dramatically higher. Net migration ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84664727591 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3674113977 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1818181818 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165844233127 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690772622366 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800260174599 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121429091018 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880277213362 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.44 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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