Scientists believe that people ruin their health by eating junk food. Some people think that the best way to prevent from eating junk food is to educate them, while others believe that this wont. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Their is a scientific evidence showing that junk food endanger people’s health conditions. It is argued by some that the most efficient method to tackle with this issue is to increase knowledge of people, while other side completely disagrees. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
There are some reasons of this issue becoming an alarming trend. First of all, a lot of people nowadays simply do not know how to prepare meal for themselves, therefore prefer the cheapest and the fastest way of consuming food, which if known as fast food. Moreover, advertisement about junk food is everywhere, which also highly affects on peoples brain and choice. Consequently, educating as the method of coping with this problem in undoubtedly a good idea, because awarenesses can help residents not only to save money, but also to maintain health condition. For instance, by using conventional products really delicious food can be cooked. So that if government enhance the role of healthy diet and public cooking courses, it will encourage people to cook at home.
However, against knowing bad sides of actions people continue doing those things, that they enjoy doing. Take for example, drawbacks of smoking are well known for everyone from childhood. In addition, even second hand smoking has abominable impact on health system. Nevertheless, vast majority still smoke. On of the reasons can be well being of people so that they can easily afford eating outside.
To conclude, I think that teaching people is a good idea, but not the most effective one. I am concerned that only when people comprehend the importance of proper nitration, the use of junk food would decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68074911477 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0631500693 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3125 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315242139319 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871937738394 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657723619482 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183861590428 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081863974904 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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