The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to scotland who visited four different attraction from 1980 to 2010
The line graph illustrates the proportion of passengers to four places in scotland including aquarium, castle, zoo and festival over a period os 30 years starting from 1980.
it can be clearly seen that while the percentage of tourists attracting castle and zoo experienced a increase the opposite was true for festival and aquarium. it ia also notable that castle was the most popular tourist attraction in scotland for most the period.
The proportion of tourists visiting castle was nearly 25 percent in comparison with 10 percent of zoo. In the period 1980 – 1995 witnessed a significant growth in the proportion of passengers visiting castle from 25 percent to 45 percent which was followed by a substantial reduction of roughly 15 percent over the next 15 years. Meanwhile, that proportion of zoo went through a fluctuation around 15 percent between 1980 and 2000. over the next 10 year, the figure for that increased dramatically fell by 10 percent.
The percentage of tourists attracting aquarium was higher than festival approximately 10 percent. In the period 1980 – 1985 the percentage of tourists visiting aquarium experienced a remarkable growth from 20 percent to 35 percent before falling to 20 percent in 1990. over the next 20 years, although there was a slight upward trend to 22 percent in 1995. The proportion of passengers visiting aquarium went through a dramatical reduction from 22 percent to 9 percent. By contrast, the proportion of tourists visiting festival decline grandually ove the period of 30 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20717131474 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8999769844 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458167330677 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0093659051 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193101154644 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865627815244 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056458547466 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141601321461 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475183722594 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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