The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods
Swmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where the relevant.
The given bar charts illustrate the numbers of passengers to Ashdown museum during the year before and after refurbishment while the given pie charts demonstrate how much tourists satisfaction when they visited in the identical period.
It can be clearly seen that, there is a remarkable growth in the numbers of visitors after it was refurbished. while the proportion of the satisfied increased significantly the opposite was true for the dissatisfied.
The total numbers of passengers to Ashdown museum during the year before refurbishment is 74000, this figure experiences a noticeable growth in the year after refurbishment, standing at 92000.
In terms of visitors satisfaction, in the year before refurbishment,the biggest percentage is the dissatisfied, at 40 percent. this is followed by the satisfied at 30 percent. The third and the fourth position belongs to the very satisfied and the very dissatisfied, at 15 percent and 10 percent respectively. Last but not least, the fifth rank is the no response at 5 percent. Regarding the year after refurbishment, standing at 40 percent, the satisfied ranks first and the very satisfied is as much as over twice in comparison with that of the year before refurbishment. it is interesting to notice that very dissatisfied and the no response share equal proportion at 5 percent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32034764767 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1230790317 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271868671664 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105831465587 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919684785211 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188043951534 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06093735894 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.