The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The line graph indicates the percentage of individuals that listen to radio and watching TV during a period of 24-hours between October and December 1992 in the UK.

Overall, people mostly listen to radio in the morning and the number of audiences gradually decreases as just a tiny group of people turn their radio on. In contrast, individuals are likely to watch TV at night as it is not their main entertainment during a day. Generally, it seems that people find the TV more enjoyable than radio in the UK, based on the information provided by graph.

Regarding the graph, it is evident that between 1 am and 6 am the percentage of people listen to radio is steady, less than 5%. However, there is a sharp increase between 6 am and 9 am as it peaks to 25% around 9 am. Following hours experience a drop, however it sometimes fluctuates in some special hours.

Moreover, less than 10 % of individuals watch TV from the midnight to 11 am. There is a little ascend in percentage of watching by 10% between 11 and 13 pm and a dramatic increase is seen until 9 pm at 45%. Afterward, It plunges as just 15% of the UK residence watch the TV. Surprisingly, 15% of people around 13 pm equally watch TV and listen to radio at the same time.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47136563877 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69395019471 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7885107365 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133022964326 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517918882137 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577461897559 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097086049218 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668518976434 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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