The line graph compares figures for unemployment in America and Japan over a period of six years.
Overall, the unemployment rate was higher in Japan, compared to the the US. However the proportion of workplace in japan rose steadily between March
1993 and March 1999. While the figure for America fell.
In March 1993, US had 7% of work fore in comparison with only 2.5% in japan. Between 1993 and March 1999 while the figure for America fell.
In March 1993 US had 7% of work fore in comparison with only 2.5% in Japan. Between 1993 and 1997 the American workforce showed a downward trend, whereas the figure for japanese had an upward trend. By March 1996, the unemployment rate increase in America as the percentage of workforce fell gradually reaching 5.5%. By contrast in Japan the figure for workforce rose steadily becoming above 4%.
The percentage of workforce in America fall over next three years reaching 5% in March 1999. There was an overall fall of 2% in the US workforce over this period of six years.
On the other hand, the proportion of japanese workforce rose over to 5% in March 1998. The figure plateaued between march 1998 and March 1999. There was an overall rise of 2.5% in March.
It is interesting to note that both the US and Japan had 5% of workforce by the end of the period shown .
The given line graph shows unemployment rates of the United States and Japan from 2005 to 2011.
In March 2005, the unemployment rate of the United States was 7.5 while in Japan it was 2.5.
In 2006, unemployment rate of the United States was 6 and 3.75 in Japan. In 2007, the unemployment rate decreased to 5.5 in the United States and 3.51 in Japan. In 2008, the unemployment rate remained constant in the United States and increased in Japan which was 4.48. In 2009, the unemployment rate has decreased in the United States to 5.2 and increased in Japan to 4.9. In 2010, the unemployment rate of both countries were 4.9 and 4.5 respectively. In 2011, the unemployment rate of both countries were equal which was 5.
From the facts stated above, we can see that the highest rate of unemployment of the United States was 7 in 2005 and lowest was 5 in 2011. We also see that Japan’s lowest unemployment rate was 2.5 in 2005 and the highest was in 2011 which was 5. It can also be said that the unemployment rate of the United States is decreasing while Japan’s is increasing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54591836735 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69257756976 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.372448979592 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9444002826 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293345806535 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192671610578 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560070845506 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246326530452 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032286401341 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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