The line graph show changes in youth adult unemplyed rates in england between 1993 and 2012.

Essay topics:

The line graph show changes in youth adult unemplyed rates in england between 1993 and 2012.

The given linear graph highlights the information about a survey conducted by labour force which reveals the changes in unemployed rates of youth adults. The data is calibrated in percentum.

Overall, it is evident that the most of the unemployed rate of people seem to be appear in london whereas, overall rest of england contained less umemployed rate till the last year.

It can be seen that people in london who aged from 16 to 24 comprised less than a quarter unemployed rate. However, it had showed a gradual decrease from the year 1995 to 2002. Moreover, unemployment rate in rest of england showed a continous decrease from the year 1994 to 2004, later on, it had been climbed to a fifth.

As far as trend was concerned, less than a fifth percent unemployed rate of overall london was declined to less than one in ten percent in the year 1997. Apart from that, it almost remained stable till the year 2005. Futhermore, overall rest of england was firstly had 10% of umemployment rateand it had followed a declined trend and during the year 2008 to 2012, it was constant.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, whereas, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55099784941 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9015135215 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153664418816 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624264356072 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521826942119 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101901681689 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348262084794 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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