The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The given line graph illustrates the number of people who drop by the UK either holidaymakers or the citizen between 1979 and 1999, while the bar graph indicates which countries were the most popular visit to UK residents in the millions of UK visitors scale in 1999. Overall, it is clear that the frequency of visit increasingly increased, the Uk was the most popular countries to french travellers.
When it comes to a first line graph, the starting point between two types of people was almost no distinction gap. However, in 1986 fiducially, the gap of those gradually risen by 13 missions in the final research.
Looking at the bar graph representing the number of visits abroad by UK citizens, the figure for Turkey was the lowest about 2 millions of UK visitors. The number of UK visitors in the United states and Spain was approximately 4 and 9 million respectively. In addition, Greece was the country where occupied rank 2 among 5 countries, nearly 3 millions of UK residents,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n by 13 missions in the final research. Looking at the bar graph representing th...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
... figure for Turkey was the lowest about 2 millions of UK visitors. The number of UK visitors ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...cupied rank 2 among 5 countries, nearly 3 millions of UK residents,
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...ries, nearly 3 millions of UK residents,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85512348311 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5205447141 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38870095316 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162020579188 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150983917998 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247169864018 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186066287647 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.