The map below is of the town of Canterburry. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school
The map presents two proposed positions for a new school for the town of Canterbury and the surrounding area.
The first site is located in north-eastern countryside. It is near the eastern main housing area of the town and not far from the main road that links Sturry with Canterbury. It would be an ideal location for students coming from Sturry, which is only 5 kilometres away, and those who lives on the east side of Canterbury. If there are students coming from Chartham, they would be able to reach the school by taking the main road that runs south-wesr of Canterbury.
The second site is situated in the town center. It is equidistant from Sturry and Chartham. Moreover, it would be convenient for students living in the housing area around the town center. However, because of the no traffic zone in the town center, parents could not drive their children to be school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f Canterbury and the surrounding area. The first site is located in north-easte...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad that runs south-wesr of Canterbury. The second site is situated in the town ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58901242298 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.288994835 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7777777778 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279959951785 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118787843399 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143747304322 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25837883139 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180755275861 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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