The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pictures provide a layout of two villages, i.e Fonton and Meadowside, as well as various changes that have been made to the areas from 1962 until the present.

Overall, Meadowside village seems to have undergone a dramatic transformation, becoming more modernized and residential with the appearance of more infrastructure and amenities. By contrast, Fonton experienced marginal changes throughout the period.

It is clear that the main changes from 1962 to 1985 involve the addition of two buildings (leisure complex and superstore) and a housing estate in Meadowside village. A superstore had been constructed at the southwest corner of this village, opposite a housing estate and its adjacent leisure complex. Furthermore, a new road which passed by all three of the areas and ran through the centre of the village, had also been built. Meanwhile, a new road which connected the two villages was the only change that occurred in Fonton.

Currently, Meadowside has become a suburb and the area between the two places has been significantly developed with the construction of a business park in the south, opposite a station that is linked to Fonton’s railway system. To the north of this station, a hotel has also been built.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23880597015 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97494134115 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1581166819 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136653544168 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567560318963 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390522313648 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830718689406 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174165544057 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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