The maps below show the changes to an art gallery floor plan in 2005 and the present day

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes to an art gallery floor plan in 2005 and the present day.

The maps illustrate the changes carried out to an art gallery floor plan from 2005 until now.
Overall, it is clear that there is a ramp for wheel chair which is constructed next to the entrance at the present, while the gallery room is removed. Besides, the exhibition 4 in 2005 is divided into two other rooms.
In terms of the exhibition rooms, there were 4 exhibition rooms in the 2005 plan, however, while three exhibition rooms 1, 2 and 3 remain now, the exhibition room 4 is separated into a temporary exhibition and a children’s area. Additionally, people witnessed a new construction of the ramp which is built for wheel chair next to the entrance.
At present, the receptionist in 2005 is transferred from the end of the entrance hall to the center of this area. Besides, the positions of the old coffee shop and gallery office are superseded by a gallery shop and a vending machine at the moment. Finally, the stairs are reconstructed to additionally install a lift now.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86709267192 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8797951612 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223185320818 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992526402302 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136497341593 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173003724113 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162096435612 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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