The maps show an art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps given illustrate some changes to an art gallery in Australia from the year 1950 to present.
As can be inferred from the maps, the art gallery has experienced considerable changes during the period shown. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the appearance of new facilities and the expansion of the art gallery.
Looking at the top of the map, in 1950, there was a courtyard which has been replaced by a children art school, Australian Aboriginal Art and Australian Art. In the southwest of the art gallery, the cafe has been separated into a Toilet and a smaller Cafe. No changes are seen in the layouts of the Temporary Exhibition and Bookshop.
Regarding the right of the map, an Australia Art has been replaced by an Asia Art. There are no changes in the positions of the Early European Art and the Middle European Art. Similarly, the sculpture and the entrance have remained unchanged about their sizes.
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- In the present era children are found to have fewer responsibilities than it used to be in the past time Some people consider it as positive development however some other people believe it to be a negative trend 73
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole Do you agree or disagree with this development 73
- Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on a child s development while others think that other factors such as televisions friends music etc have the biggest effects Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Writing task 1 11
- The maps show an art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82716049383 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69887951144 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1338858132 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227312010005 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974558716394 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874275988664 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158634168651 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579607141921 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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