Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried out by private companies, individuals or government?
I prefer to talk about which research can improve people medicals life. I am choice private companies and individual’s researcher.
Firstly, the private companies are a good way to enhance medical research, but the government should be a peering the companies because as you know the private companies always find out about profits without caring the quality. Provided that the government peers over other companies, the private companies could be work by a good quality or standard. For example, when you find out about good private companies, you will find the private companies which under peer the government.
According of opinion many. I personally agree with private companies which support the researcher do well because the companies should support and caring their researcher. And they always attempt to create and find a new invention in order to spread the companies around the world
In contrast, people who work individuals they may work with their good mood without any stress because the inventor needs some of the relaxed life to invent new medical invents. As you know, the medical invent are not easy. It is complex and this is why they need some of relaxing life to invents the successful invents.
To sum up, as stated above, I have talked with a researcher who work with private companies and individual’s research
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...hey always attempt to create and find a new invention in order to spread the companies around...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to spread the companies around the world In contrast, people who work individuals...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t any stress because the inventor needs some of the relaxed life to invent new medical inve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for example, in contrast, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21363636364 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75894862596 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531818181818 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7061522441 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298629836778 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124900518757 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733591105325 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163013856434 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824044977142 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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