A growing population is a big problem in many countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or in the countryside.
There are three ways of how the government solves the population. And why I prefer to build homes in the countryside.
rapidly increase population is one of the big issues and government attempts to solve it via movement for their people in order to build new homes in the countryside because countryside is always less sophisticated than cities. Therefore, government which has problem in population try to put some basic fundamentals like hospital, school, university, branches from government and others.
putting higher education raises to appeal people to live in the countryside because, in the reality, some people move their countryside to cities in order to get the higher education, but when government put universities in the countryside, people will stay in their countryside. Thus, the cities will decrease from people who emigrate and not impact from the population. The scientist said that around the world scientists solve that problem by creating higher education.
job opportunities are the major situation to move people to the countryside because people look for a job anywhere if it is long distance, they will go. In consequence, this kind of people can move and take home in the countryside. For example, some companies work in the countryside especially if the company has the industry to produce products (goods) the company does not have a problem if they work companies’ job in the countryside.
TO SUM UP, putting higher education, job opportunities and solution rabidly increase population are these ways how to move to the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6812749004 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07744103487 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505976095618 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7868063971 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200789984733 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824868481185 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479890854733 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12004875872 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539400495698 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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