how can turkey grow its potential income received in tourism
There are many pros and cons in regards to growing turkey’s potential income received in tourism.
Initially, enhancing and raising the event that attracts some tourists to come in order to visit a lot of tourism that place which can make money from tourists. Thus, increase the income in turkey. In addition, the government has to encourage some tourism to come in turkey by coping with tourism via their own languages in order not to find any obstacles if they require some things from the information center. The government also attempts to obtain the tourists a good service in order to encourage them to come due to the fact that tourism will spend their money in this country if they like it and will come to every vacation. To exemplify, in turkey where I live, I have seen numerous people come in turkey and like it and try to spend their money in turkey.
Secondly, increasing the number of local shopping can impact positively for Turkish income since tourists always like to look for many things like traditional food by traditional restaurant and things that describe the country which they visit it, such as pictures and key chains by local shops. Hence, the government will make money from local shops by adding taxes. When the government adds taxes, they will make many things the government can not do it before. For example, increasing the salaries for the government’s employment.
To sum up, improving the events in which attracts some people to visit the place and raising the number of traditional shops can impact via Turkish income from tourism
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92164179104 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5676929124 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9644766199 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251901338384 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112712118968 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117476548242 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19855829341 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14151646791 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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