Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with students who take loan to complete their education instead of working because the working will be impacted negatively.
Firstly, I agree with students who take student loan rather than work because working within studying is a big issue. The issue is that student cannot get higher grade since they work in the time which should be studying. The studying will be hard for them to arrange their time and work as they have to study in the time which has free not work in order to be successful students. The scientists indicate that many students want to work to help their families, but they are impossible as they though that students will lose their studying.
Additionally, as you know, these days education fees are more higher costs than previous time and some students cannot get an education. they should take student loan in order to get an education. Thus, students might get education and after their graduate, they can work and they shall be paid back the money which loans it. For example, some poor families are impossible to get their members education since they don not have a lot of money. they have to apply to take student loan in order to teach families members.
On the other hand, sometimes student loan has problem. The problem is after graduate you can not pay back the money because of the fact that the salary of the new job is weak and they can not pay back the loan. Therefore, the giver will be going to judge to return the money which the giver loan it for the student. The students who take loan will be in the prison if they don’t pay back the money after a little period.
To sum up, as stated above, some of the reasons that may influence our educational time and I accept to get a loan if students need it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cept to get a loan if students need it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, you know, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24079392579 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435736677116 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0437201336 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255278034928 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122329598076 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722424616627 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169851122556 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495891846196 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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