Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
Countries generally have been experiencing manifold problems caused by the rapid growth of the population. It is believed that not only governments but also individuals should be the ones who are liable for addressing this issue. This essay will examine a few typical problems resulted from overpopulation and its solutions.
There are two main repercussions that are led by the increasing number of citizens. First and foremost, traffic congestion inexplicably becomes adversity since the traffic needs to suffer a plethora of people on the road. Ho Chi Minh City where traffic is an everyday concern to citizens, to exemplify, experiences the greatest figure for indigenous residents, immigrants, and tourists in Vietnam, which means almost every road is full of motorbikes and cars, especially during rush hours. Furthermore, rising crime is also at an alarming rate as people are more likely to take desperate measures or commit an offense when having to cope with poor living conditions. One case in point is that most Vietnamese young men who have done something against the law mostly cannot afford education and lack recognition of all unlawful activities such as robbery and murder due to the miserable living standards. Aiming to deal with these occurring problems, the public and governments are the ones who have the power to put an end to the issues.
To tackle the problems, refining public transports and alter the public’s perception about buses ought to be put under consideration meticulously by the governments. Such activities regarding organizing community meetings about benefits of new transportation, charging for workplace parking, for instance, offer inconceivable incentives for people to travel by bus. According to conviction, financially supporting children from poor families to go to school and imposing strict sentences on lawbreakers are seen as long-term solutions to poverty and major offense.
It is justifiable that society is also accountable for preventing these repercussions. People should reduce the usage of motorbikes and cars by taking buses to go to school and work as well as walking to a nearby place. Installing cameras around the neighborhood also helps reduce high levels of crime.
On balance, the traffic congestion and increasing level of offenders merely escalate unless efforts are made to shift the public conscientiousness. While governments have a critical role to play, individuals need to take responsibility to overcome the issues.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 965.302439024 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 387.0 196.424390244 197% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48320413437 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11263236821 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 106.607317073 229% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630490956072 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 283.868780488 235% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0315568389 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.823529412 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126321039546 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395574254748 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449758443728 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065182081215 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060714403782 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 40.7170731707 297% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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