People participate in 6 difference English Course in pare, 2016

Essay topics:

People participate in 6 difference English Course in pare, 2016

The table shows the information student who attending ielts programs in six different courses (es, test,elfast,webster and warungielts) in pare, 2016.
overall, it is clear that on ielts reading and listening catagories, shared the highest number of class participant. followed by test and elfast. webster and warung ielts was on the bottom of the list with student range from 144 to 155 participant respectively.
Moving to writing task 1 program, there was a slight difference order of the list, which was es ranked first (157) and ge in the second place (155). Subsequently, warung ielts and webster were on two last place with 150 and 138 students respectively.
Furthermore, in writing task 2 program, webster ranked first (147), followed by three different courses, - warung ielts, es and elfast- at the same level (146). On contrary, ge and es were less interested courses for this program, with similar number of class participant (145).
Despite the variation number of student among the programs, it seems that ge and es were two most popular places for learning ielts material such as reading, listening and writing task 1 programs. While webster was the most favorite course for acquiring knowledge in term of writing task 2.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , elfast
...ograms in six different courses es, test,elfast,webster and warungielts in pare, 2016. ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...webster and warungielts in pare, 2016. overall, it is clear that on ielts reading and ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Followed
...he highest number of class participant. followed by test and elfast. webster and warung ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Webster
...rticipant. followed by test and elfast. webster and warung ielts was on the bottom of t...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'program' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...tively. Furthermore, in writing task 2 program, webster ranked first 147, followed by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, while, such as, in the second place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1144278607 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86279043275 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4706957796 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129713695345 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533509417764 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664051575659 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858183425722 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751783278811 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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