The pie charts present the utilization of water distributed in industrial , agricultural and deomestic aspect in six selected areas .
Referring to agriculture, central aisa contributes the majority of percentage with 88% , being followed by 84% of that in africa and 81% in south east aisa respectively. Although south america accounts to 71% far higer than the figure consumped in north america (39%) as well as europe (32%) , it still cannot compete with the above ones in this sector.
Comparing with other areas, europe is undoubtedly the largest consumer that 53% of the water is utilized in industry , which is 5% higher than that in northern america , let alone 12% of south east asia , 10% of south america and the ones less than 10%.
Surprisingly, in domestic use, there is the sample amount of water costed in the chosen areas of asia , which is 2 % lower than africa consumed and far less than the number used in america and europe .
To sum up ,among the selected areas , agricultrual use is definitely the largest part of the water consumption except that in noth america and europe, while europe and norther amecia are responsible for biggest water cost in industrial sector . Besides , asia areas not only share the equal distribution in deomestic water use , but also the lowest proportion within all the sampled places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, still, well, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03167420814 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70574059016 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1652740122 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.857142857 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203599750711 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102036665367 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709593003245 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119513512451 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800702688546 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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