Contained in the pie chart provided is data pertaining to the proportion of males and females arrested in the five years ending 1994, while the bar graph demonstrates different reasons for arrest in both sexes. Overall, the percentage of males arrested was higher than that of females, and public drinking was the most common reason in this five years period.
In regard to the pie chart, one sees that females committed less crime than males over the given period. It is evident that the proportion of women who were arrested just slightly accounted 9%, whereas the same figure in men was nearly four times higher, at 32% of total.
Turning into the bar chart, there were five common types of crimes committed by both genders. Apparently, the top reason illustrated in the chart was public drinking which made up just over 30% in men and well over 35% in women. The second popular reason for women arrested was assault, which gained roughly 20%, while drink driving, around 26%, was the next common reason for men arrested beside public drinking. The percentages of women who committed drink driving, breach of order and theft hovered around from 12.5% to 14%. The proportions of breach of order, assault and theft committed by men were approximately 18%, 16% and 14%, respectively. In addition, there were nearly 20% of men and about 17% of women arrested by other reasons.
Finally, it is also worth noting that almost 5% of men and 7% of women denied telling their reason for being arrested.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...theft hovered around from 12.5% to 14%. The proportions of breach of order, assault...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied telling'.
Suggestion: denied telling
...g that almost 5% of men and 7% of women denied to tell their reason for being arrested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, finally, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8560311284 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37009381642 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6633106403 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.454545455 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292505543605 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114382639854 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105731497952 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184497086079 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137918992909 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.