The realm of following a strict routine or having changes in life is one in which there is a fair degree of controversy. This writer takes the view that changes make our life more exciting and fulfilling.
Common sense plainly dictates that changes are parts of life, as life is always unpredictable. One should be amply aware that when a new things come to us, whether they a bad or good, they will help you gain new experiences in life. Furthermore, people who are willing to accept changes in life often have an open mind and can be able to face with challenges without fear and anxiety. In addition, a research, which was conducted by the psychology department of the National University of Vietnam, demonstrated that 84.5% people who are happy with their current life think that changes are vitally importance to their life, since they do not want to get stuck in a boring routine for the rest of their life.
Opponents of the point of view outlined above might contend that the advantage of strict routine is effective life management. It is no doubt that there are many people, who do not keen on life changes, feel more comfortable with a disciplined life since they can avoid as many unexpected changes as possible. However, in spite of having a perfect routine, people still not get rid of sudden changes. As a result, they may feel disappointed or even shocked when their familiar routine is corrupted.
In conclusion, no one can forecast the future, thus a perfect routine will become obsolete, and people will have to change to adapt to new life. Therefore, it should have been abundantly demonstrated that changes help people discover many aspects of life, so they make life more fascinating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...e should be amply aware that when a new things come to us, whether they a bad or good,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81694915254 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63948755832 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4871260238 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257200826576 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107346650826 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458263513006 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18690202009 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419508191064 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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