The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts provide information about the proportion of household expenditures between Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The data are shown in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the greatest household expenditure in Japan was other goods and services, whereas in Malaysia there was housing became the biggest over the period. Both people in Japan and Malaysia least amount of their expenditure was on Health care.

Looking first at two categories, Japan was the greatest percentage of expenditure on other goods and services (29%), while in Malaysia on other goods and services accounted for just 26% of the total. Likewise, Japanese expenditure was higher on transport than the Malaysian by 10% at around a fifth and one in ten respectively.

In terms of the remaining expenditures, in Malaysia housing became the biggest proportion with 34%, whereas Japan only 21%. Additionally, Food came in second place in Malaysia with 27% in household expenditure compared with Japan, it was slightly lower with 24%. Lastly, none of the countries spent much on Health Care which was 6% in Japan and under 5% in Malaysia.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, likewise, look, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18131868132 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81110413979 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1589784354 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295553354073 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13483664098 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118946078367 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205278712872 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105481625174 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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