The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts provide the information about how much water was used for various purposes in six areas around the world. The data are shown in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the highest amount of water used is for agricultural, while domestic is the lowest proportion of water used.

Looking first at the data, In Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, and South America above 70% of water used goes to the agricultural, whereas North America and South America this rate is 39% and 32% respectively. On the other hand, North America and Europe is used water for industrial purposes is 48% and 53%, while the remaining areas (South America, Africa, Central and South East Asia) used water for industrial below 15%.

In terms of the remaining purposes, South America is the biggest percentage of water used for domestic with 19%. Furthermore, North America and Europe used water for domestic purposes is 13% and 15% respectively. Lastly, none of the areas used much water on domestic which is under 10% in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, lastly, look, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94413407821 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47389541955 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486033519553 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7549044928 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341702887234 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174393717197 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120223355001 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263591542104 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792110890704 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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