The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table illustrates information about the distribution of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three numerous diets. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that carbohydrates were the greatest percentage among all types of diets, whereas fat was the lowest.

In terms of various diets, sportspeople healthy diet meals with the greatest proportion of carbohydrates at 60%, compared to a healthy diet and average diet that were slightly lower at 50% and 40% respectively. In addition, the second largest nutrient is protein. Furthermore, in the average diet, the amount of protein is the biggest with 40%. It was then followed by a healthy diet at less than a third and the figure for a healthy sports diet is minimally lower than the former at a quarter.

Regarding the types of diets, fat is the last nutrient that proportion only below a quarter for all types of diets. Both average and healthy diet the proportion of fat it is same with a fifth. Lastly, it is slightly lower with less than a fifth for the healthy sport diet.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, regarding, second, then, third, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9217877095 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83858261505 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6769966206 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228910005125 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107176516313 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1363408061 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183414851627 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104777139941 0.0819641961636 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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