THE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF FIVE KINDS OF BOOKS SOLD BY A BOOKSELLER BETWEEN 1972 AND 2012

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THE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF FIVE KINDS OF BOOKS SOLD BY A BOOKSELLER BETWEEN 1972 AND 2012.

The three given pie chat illustrate in term of the popularity of five different books, namely adult fiction, children fiction, biography, travel, and others which were sold by the bookseller over the course of 40 years from 1972 to 2012.
Overall, the figure for fiction books had an upward trend in children and adult whereas there was an opposite pattern for the other kinds.
In 1972, 15% of the least popular was seen by books base on traveling while both biography, children’s fiction and adult fiction saw the same percentage, around 20%. At this point, other types of books were the highest purchased by readers.
Over the 20 years, the ratio of selling children's fiction witness a slight fluctuation 20%, 22%, and 25% respectively. Meanwhile, a significant increase in the rate of fiction books for adults was sold and doubled especially in 2012, 20%, 25%, and 45% respectively.
The revenue of biography and other books, by contrast, were decreased slightly by 5% and reached 15% and 20% respectively. There was the same pattern with travel and other things. The number of other kinds continued to decline twofold after dropping gradually, from 15%, 18% and 10% on travel and 25%,20% and 12% respectively.

Votes
Average: 7 (4 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70854971247 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7693445237 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125181631296 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518188869044 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572183976911 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753002374329 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570942781531 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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