The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The drawings demonstrate maps of a university's sports center both currently, and after applying the provided alterations. The area of Gym has been augmented and eight new facilities have substituted two previous outdoor courts, according to these visuals.
First, the main area of Gym at the north side of Sports centre will be extended twice approximately. The location of eastern outdoor courts transforms to two dance studios, one Sports hall adjacent to present seating, south to Gym building. At the south of current outdoor court, there will be a cafe and a changing room.
Next, the western outdoor courts will be changed into a vast leisure pool. At the south of this pool, a door will open to a changing room, that has ha door at its eastern wall to the reception. Furthermore, a sports shop will be built adjacent to this changing room in the south of the whole Sports center.
Finally, all the walls which surround the reception now will be destructed. New openings will be made in order to facilitate movement between different parts. In addition, routes will be added between new sections. For example, a path links the new door of Gym to the reception, passing through Dance studios, Changing room, and Cafe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The drawings demonstrate maps of a universitys sports center both currentl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9806763285 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65364741764 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6980327825 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136893771216 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588884190527 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435118074397 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859450912656 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0092598342465 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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